Hi Sylvia,

This is intensely intimate. Passion cares not for propriety...
it does not hold its words, it speaks what it feels without shyness.
Your poem is written as boldly, appropriately. And likewise, your verse is depicted with an intricacy of details and retold with nuances that cannot be forgotten.
I've read this one several times... and on each perusal I'm amazed by the power of it. I'm glad I read this one. Thank you.