Double Tanka. This is a new variation of having a tanka written side by side, each line of the tanka is seperated by a comma to it's twin.


Gather me, dear heart, Make my life complete
with arms linked and locked tight, tell me I am yours alone
hold me and kiss me, make me believe love is real
Take hold of my wounded heart, I will gather the scattered
pages together with your love, pieces taking us home.


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