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 ottermonkey |
Responseku...a haiku response game. |
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Posts: 7678 (08/28/05 19:21:57)
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I got this from seeing so many, including me and our wonderful Irene doing it, haiku responses to other's haikus. this is a bit of a different slant, no word leaving, just write a haiku based on the one previous, how it makes you feel, it's content, etc.
A lone night's peek a sliver of a moon slips her covers over me. |
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BekiLynn |
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Posts: 905 (08/28/05 22:57:04) The Haiku Hottie |
bright slivered moon
hangs cradled between two palms - hot summer night |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (08/29/05 03:45:34)
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Late August morning
clouds hang across dawn's face like dirty laundry |
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BekiLynn |
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Posts: 905 (08/29/05 23:00:36) The Haiku Hottie |
storm clouds gather -
even the seagulls lay low seeking safe harbor |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (08/30/05 03:35:55)
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These wicked clouds
by lack of bird song, even they don't trust this wind. OM |
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poeticpiers |
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Posts: 2632 (08/30/05 10:53:10) Poet Without Peer |
The wind blowing free
sings sweet melodies to me. although I am deaf |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (08/30/05 10:55:00)
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Living poetry
soundless songs robins sing while you sleep. OM |
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BekiLynn |
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Posts: 905 (08/30/05 20:01:12) The Haiku Hottie |
sleeping beside you
with my hand on your heart - cricket lullaby |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (08/30/05 22:47:48)
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Summer night
streets double as mirrors for our hopes and dreams OM |
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BekiLynn |
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Posts: 905 (08/31/05 00:21:06) The Haiku Hottie |
along sultry streets
heat rises from the sidewalk as I rise from you |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (08/31/05 06:18:06)
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Risen from this road
while returning to my home: ghosts of my youth |
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BekiLynn |
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Posts: 905 (08/31/05 19:32:41) The Haiku Hottie |
to look backward now
is certain devestation - my eyes look just ahead |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (08/31/05 22:14:33)
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poeticpiers |
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Posts: 2632 (09/03/05 04:28:52) Poet Without Peer |
Storms will pass over
Peace returns the world refreshed. You are my haven |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (09/03/05 04:56:54)
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BekiLynn |
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Posts: 905 (09/03/05 10:45:26) The Haiku Hottie |
mother earth gone mad -
each day new horrors revealed as waters recede |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (09/03/05 10:49:05)
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every heart is sad
the emptiness lays like a drowned life clung to stars. OM |
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poeticpiers |
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Posts: 2632 (09/03/05 10:50:06) Poet Without Peer |
As waters recede
a chance to redeem ourselves by helping others |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (09/03/05 10:54:41)
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A cloud bursts, tears
of heaven watching these children mis behaive OM |
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poeticpiers |
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Posts: 2632 (09/03/05 13:57:50) Poet Without Peer |
Children misbehave
but mother nature demonstrates. She is in control |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (09/03/05 14:10:51)
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on a sleepless night
winds unraked the stones of missing temple |
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