Temples rise, then fall;
their crafters long forgotten.
The past becomes ash.
Uplifting, eh?
their crafters long forgotten.
The past becomes ash.
Uplifting, eh?
- The Garden Gate
- The 9-11 Project.
- Eastern Wings
- Deeply Dark
- Epic Poems
- Mullings
- Derek's Garden
- The Lover's Grove...
- The Rainbow Room
- Semper Fi...A Collection of Works By Antony Spivey, the Poetdude.
- The Sanctuary
- I to I...the Personal Archive of Ivor And Irene Hogg
- Fan-Ficts-Ation
- The Wee Small Garden (for kids)
- The Moment We Changed: A Rememberence of September...
- Gently Used Works
- Gently Used Works II
- Magnolia And Moonlight: The Poetry of Mara Broadaway
- The Confessional Files of a Rogue
- Michael Cafferty, Poems From a Life
- Morgaine's Mists of Avalon
- Vision and Verse***The Works of Rebecca Savage-Owens (IMJara)
- Quiet's Refuge
- The Many Colors of Rouge
- Just a bag of Pixie Dust.
- Grey Matter
- Short And Sweet: Collected Works by Kevin Urenda
- Hall Of Laurels
- The Keeper's Keepers...
- Hot Spots To Visit on The Web
- gardengate storage
- Le Musee de Beaujolais---the place of visual imagery...
- The Workshop
- Gala's Games ...The Challenge Forum
- Galadrial's Ring...V
Responseku...a haiku response game.
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ottermonkey |
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A turn of dry wind
erases stories, buildings rising as sand dune castles liked it though OM |
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Just a Mona Lisa |
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Much appreciated, OM.
Sands shift, forgetting all my yesterdays. I smile. Eos arises. |
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ottermonkey |
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davic sprite whispers
honed name of a cloud bursting from loss of self faith No problem, ma'am |
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BekiLynn |
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Posts: 905 (09/04/05 22:44:48) The Haiku Hottie |
if self becomes lost
in the hurry of right now- will time restore faith? |
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poeticpiers |
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Posts: 2632 (09/05/05 01:23:35) Poet Without Peer |
suspend disbelief
faith need no evidence at all accept and believe |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (09/05/05 03:35:08)
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Spirits honed on honey
sweet peanut butter, stick to roofs of blue tongued sky OM |
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poeticpiers |
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Posts: 2632 (09/05/05 06:52:39) Poet Without Peer |
your honeyed tongue,charmingly
compliments and complements. Do you spread sunshine? |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (09/05/05 07:02:03)
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Sunshine draws path
through a magnolia tree shining green lights. OM |
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BekiLynn |
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Posts: 905 (09/05/05 18:42:39) The Haiku Hottie |
green light glimmers
on the incoming tide - phosphorescent! |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (09/05/05 18:46:31)
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Neap tide, deep at sea
whales tap waves with tails say heartfelt goodbyes OM |
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BekiLynn |
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Posts: 905 (09/05/05 21:16:48) The Haiku Hottie |
whales bid adieu,
slide beneath frothy white waves - red sails turn toward home |
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ottermonkey |
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poeticpiers |
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Posts: 2632 (09/06/05 02:37:44) Poet Without Peer |
the sea remembers
all lovers permanently. As if time was not |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (09/06/05 02:50:24)
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Awake, shore roar
she cries for lost days crashing into beach |
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poeticpiers |
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Posts: 2632 (09/06/05 03:02:25) Poet Without Peer |
Written in the sand
your love poems are erased by the rising tide |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (09/06/05 03:04:48)
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My sandcastle world
built on a blue day, lost as hope at high tide |
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poeticpiers |
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Posts: 2632 (09/06/05 03:10:03) Poet Without Peer |
The high tide line marks
the limits of fantasy The real world persists |
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ottermonkey |
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Posts: 7678 (09/06/05 03:12:01)
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aloft where gulls fly
like saucers on kite wind without strings attached |
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BekiLynn |
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Posts: 905 (09/06/05 22:24:10) The Haiku Hottie |
my heart rises
soaring with westbound gulls - we can touch the sun |
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- The Garden Gate
- The 9-11 Project.
- Eastern Wings
- Deeply Dark
- Epic Poems
- Mullings
- Derek's Garden
- The Lover's Grove...
- The Rainbow Room
- Semper Fi...A Collection of Works By Antony Spivey, the Poetdude.
- The Sanctuary
- I to I...the Personal Archive of Ivor And Irene Hogg
- Fan-Ficts-Ation
- The Wee Small Garden (for kids)
- The Moment We Changed: A Rememberence of September...
- Gently Used Works
- Gently Used Works II
- Magnolia And Moonlight: The Poetry of Mara Broadaway
- The Confessional Files of a Rogue
- Michael Cafferty, Poems From a Life
- Morgaine's Mists of Avalon
- Vision and Verse***The Works of Rebecca Savage-Owens (IMJara)
- Quiet's Refuge
- The Many Colors of Rouge
- Just a bag of Pixie Dust.
- Grey Matter
- Short And Sweet: Collected Works by Kevin Urenda
- Hall Of Laurels
- The Keeper's Keepers...
- Hot Spots To Visit on The Web
- gardengate storage
- Le Musee de Beaujolais---the place of visual imagery...
- The Workshop
- Gala's Games ...The Challenge Forum
- Galadrial's Ring...V
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