| Author | Comment | |||
|---|---|---|---|---|
 hernamewas |
How Long? ****OM's Read of the Week**** |
Lead | ||
|
Posts: 14 (07/07/08 17:54:40) |
How many times can you stand at the waters edge and wait excited expectation and be shocked to find silence or trickles where there were once waves?.. Homming pigeons like love needs a place to land.
there are cascades waiting for open arms when again and again you are met with silence..?
Last Edited By: ottermonkey 09/07/08 07:15:55.
Edited 1 time.
|
|||
|
hushush8 |
re this poem | |||
|
Posts: 66 (07/07/08 18:39:37) |
& a big sigh rite back at youbabe. a tender longing poem, something we all go thru. nice. peter |
|||
 Willowdown |
||||
|
Posts: 403 (07/07/08 19:26:13) |
i think we've all been there...
enjoyed your thoughts |
|||
|
ottermonkey |
||||
|
Posts: 7446 (07/08/08 02:37:08)
|
I have had those feelings in every relationship I have ever had...yet the greatest love of all, I married. I like the mood of this, you are at the point in the
feel of the poem where you are expressing the frustration without being dramatic...a fine demonstration of that. In all, a very satisfying read!
Jesse
|
|||
|
poeticpiers |
||||
|
Posts: 2425 (07/10/08 13:01:13) Poet Without Peer |
you cannot tell your beloved of your love too often at least twice a day is necessary.
|
|||
|
Gala Of the Garden |
OH HELL.... | |||
|
Posts: 8286 (08/31/08 19:57:31)
|
YEAH!
Had to bring this one back... 
|
|||
|
Cottagerose |
||||
|
Posts: 1817 (09/01/08 09:49:29) Siren of The Southern Lands |
I am glad this didn't fall off the board before I got to read it.
Your poem was very readable, a sad longing, something any of us who have "loved and lost" understand. You caught the feeling very well. True love won't leave you standing on the shore but will have a boat for you. I hope you find that soon. Sylvia  |
|||
|
ottermonkey |
||||
|
Posts: 7667 (09/07/08 07:17:14)
|
This poem touched me when I first read it, it continues...fantastic poem...congratulations!
Jesse
|
|||
|
Ihavetea |
wow | |||
|
Posts: 325 (09/07/08 16:05:10) Magnolia |
this really is perfectly captured! well done...true of love and in lesser ways, old friendships, too.
Mara |
|||
|
Gala Of the Garden |
||||
|
Posts: 8291 (09/07/08 18:43:42)
|
Well picked OM!
And deserving!
|
|||
|
Michael Pare Reid |
yes | |||
|
Posts: 2 (09/10/08 19:19:13) |
that's a very lovely poem.
|
|||
|
poeticpiers |
||||
|
Posts: 2494 (10/08/08 13:30:48) Poet Without Peer |
on rereading iI realised that this was about unrequited love. To love and be loved in equal measure is the ultimate may you find it as I did Albeit late in
life
|
|||
http://x74.xanga.com/30f863e444c347288478/z5872977.gif
